Flap
Our egos can make us fly
then reality sets in and we crash wings on fire.
Razor
love is a two edged sword requited and un.
Live Love Laugh
death is the fly in life's ointment
but worry not everyone's in the same boat
spend your time living, loving and laughing
it won't save you but it will make life worth while.
1 - " Definition of double-edged sword.: something that has or can have both favorable and unfavorable consequences" ... so it's risky offering/giving LOVE (clearly a 4-letter word) . (cont.)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
(cont.) 2 - 3rd? definition i found for REQUITE: verb " respond to (love or affection): return." SO, i guess, by " un" , you mean 'not returned' (love) in U.S. i'd use 'worthwhile' or 'worth one's while'. but you ain't in U.S.! ! all 3 shorts are worth pondering, and should be taught in grade school. to MyPoemList bri :)