When friendly concern becomes more than need
For occasional contact, - - then beware!
When you find yourself feeding too deeply
On words, and yearning for more, - - then take care!
When days seem unfilled unless voice is heard
Of immeasurable warmth to your ear.... when
Exchanges, however mundane are occurring
Without any excuse, it is plain then
You have crossed a fine barrier, the threshold
Of love has been breached, and has captured you
Wholly. - From now on you will be emboldened.
Your heart is lost in the crossing, - 'tis true,
And from now on no threshold of love remains.
You have entered the Paradise love contains.
Fay this certainly sounds like a distant love affair..cant wait to hear the voice of a loved one...and then you are at peace...A great write..10++ Sue
...but first you must open the door...another absolutley gorgeous write here Fay.
Warm, aware, and very revealing. A gentle poem of great merit. 10, of course. As always, Sandra
Hahahahaha this was a fabulous awareness poem Fay! thanks for the advice.......10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Unique slant on love Fay...excellent writing...Fi 10+++