Through The Window Of A Baby's Eyes Poem by Tan Pratonix

Through The Window Of A Baby's Eyes

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Through the window of
A baby's eyes
A budding rose
I saw,

But in the heart
Of a grown-up man
I felt
Its crooked claw.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tracy-lee Eckstein 24 April 2006

I like this poem, it is very short but very decriptive. Every word is true, the wording is perfect.

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Gina Onyemaechi 27 January 2006

The younger individuals learn risk-assessment, the better, I'd say! : -) I like this write, Tan, but I don't agree that we all get this cynical when we grow up. Kind regards, Gina.

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