Thy Lilium Poem by Troy Clark

I really like this poem. keep on writing.

wow now what i want to know is who is the lilium satin or god

nice love it keep up the good work

Whoa Troy man that was good my isn't anything compared to yours man I hope I'm as poetic as you some day

This is a very beautiful poem. It's not as superficial as some of the other poems i have read (not yours) . It has real meaning to it I am falling in love w/ all of your poems please keep writing XOXO, Kolee

So nice ink! I enjoyed this poem. Thanks a lot poet Troy Clark. Be well always.

wow that is a wonderful poem i wanna read all them now! ! ! ! ttyl

The previous commenter is correct. You are young to write this and you have talent to make your poetry bloom. GW62

nice poem..... you are young and have the potential....keep up the good work ency bearis

Troy, since you asked me to read this, I will say, number one, I do not like especially to be asked to read ones work.... But I did read it, and number two, just a personal thing I do not especially like Relgion poetry, good or bad, or unless it has a definate reason as for its intent, example dealing with death, ect..... But you have alot of potential, just watch your grammer, very carefully, I use the dicionary all the time and still make mistakes..... You will do fine with a little more reaching from within the soul.........Bonnie