Tilt Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

Tilt

Rating: 5.0


Drifting vacant skies, forever on wings,
Is little blackbird, whose heart ever sings!
Soaring in mellow sunshine, nowhere a care,
Like a Parkside picnic in the sunny glare!

Darling of the blue, and marshmallow clouds,
At times seen alone, oftentimes in crowds!
Pretty blackbird, which place is your home?
And whatever wanderlust causes you to roam?

Gracefully you fly on gold skies of late July,
As the last moments of one summer day tick by;
But, too soon the whole world loses its light,
And you vanish into the ebony, kindred night!

Tilt
Saturday, January 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: bird,flight,summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 28 January 2020

BEAUTIFUL POEM// I ENJOYED THE BIRDS; THE FREEDOM BEING OF THE BLUE SKY; THE KINGDOM OF LIBERTY; LIBERAL WINGS FLAPPING THERE WILLINGLY; HITHER TO THITHER; NO HINDRANCE; NO BARRICADE IN THE WANDERING FLYING OF THE MIND; NORTH TO SOUTH; EAST TO EAST; DAWN TO DUSK; TWILIGHT TO SUNLIGHT BORN; DELIGHTFULLY FREEDOM ENJOY THEY ARE THROUGH ALL SEASONS////

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Chinedu Dike 28 January 2020

Beautifully conceived and exquisitely crafted in verse with rhythmic splendour. The visionary impact of the flow of your words very lovely. A masterly creation, Madam. Remain enriched.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 28 January 2020

I do intend to try, Chinedu. Thank you for the delightful inspiration.

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Kostas Lagos 26 January 2020

Beautiful work Evelyn!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 26 January 2020

Kostas, I thank you for the joy of your kind comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 January 2020

A well crafted lovely piece......10+++❤️

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 26 January 2020

My sincerest thanks, Bernard.

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Kingsley Egbukole 25 January 2020

Seasons and their peculiar attributes. The beauty of creation. Beautiful poem

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 25 January 2020

I am delighted with your kind words, Kingsley.

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