~ Time Heals
To live each day and not forget
A day that has gone by,
To seek the answer that you get
From memory’s prisoned sigh -
For life goes on though life seem done
And deemed of little worth,
And one will wake when morn has come;
Her cycles plague the earth.
When spirit, stopped up in despair,
Would rend the very soul,
The heart that is too pained to care
Seeks refuge in the cold-
The anesthesia of the rock
Too heavy to be borne
Will wear off as the years go by
And lighter will become.
For even as the oceans
Will wear away a stone,
Time mellows the emotions
To help the pain be borne.
Hi Adeline, A very nicely constructed piece of poetry that takes the reader on a journey with beginning, middle and end. The message in your poetry is profound and meaningful and the presentation as one might expect is first class. Take care, Neil.
Adeline, this is beautiful and sad. I can identify with this one. This is the third one of yours I have read. I like your style. Ron
a joyous nd steady pull of time and emotions shine through in this poem, i love it
Adeline: Very well written, as usual, and I love the smoothness of your rythem. Really enjoyed it. You got my 10+++ Lynn
Your poem has such a rhythm to it and that is a powerful adding the beat of time passing underneath the words. You handle the reins of writing very very adeptly. Excellent piece.
This is a very moving work. Time, like the oceans, can move mountains...
I like your style of rhyming and it's always perfect and beautiful..sort of like the old style of poetry, which I try to write sometimes and which is always pleasing.
[For even as the oceans Will wear away a stone, Time mellows the emotions To help the pain be borne. ]-great poem with a mesage so clear. I loved it.10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely poem, difficult subject. Tightly written and well crafted, beautiful first four lines. See 'The Late Gift' Thank you and keep well.