~ Who Am I
All of the words I want to say
Some other poet has said
In such a stupendously marvelous way
That they just cry out to be read.
So many beautiful poems
Express what I want to express;
For me to say it again
Would be mere presumptuousness.
My words would be a regression
In the light of their thorough address,
Yet my thoughts cry out for expression;
I'll just have to say them I guess
And hope that beside the great masters
My efforts will not be in vain,
And somewhere in the ages hereafter
Someone will read them again
And see the need through my prism
And somehow recognize why
Those words were torn from the bosom
Of one so unworthy as I.
Who Am I is the most pleasant poem I read this morning..It really touched my heart! I find it so sincere, so bright and so encouraging. Having read it, I remember how I began. I do remember my own first attempts of writing poetry, and that set of fears which oftenly accompanied me: of not proving myself skilled enough, of having approached themes and topics that belong to other poets/models, or are already established by others, of not being sure if I have succeeded in delivering the message or the meaning I wanted, and the list could go on and on. I guess that, in the end, we're all dealing with the same hardship. What is more important is that we all have a voice, and all we have to do is to work hard to perfect ourselves, in order to discover it. And yes, to leave our fears behind, to allow the true self to reveal who we really are in the poetry we leave for others to read. You are a remarkable poet. Thank you so much for letting me know of your work!
this now goes from MyPoemList to my/our June 2017 showcase for PH poets, on my PH site. i'll let you know (i'll send to you perhaps) when your poem and the poems of about 20 other female PH poets are on display. your name will be displayed also. any questions? ask me. if you wish to not be included, tell me. Thanks. bri :)
Absolutely beautiful! You do justice to your Muse, Mr. Service. (smile)
You are worthy, I bend my hands toward you with praise, and brilliants. Thanks Adeline.
An insightful and beautiful rendition of words with a tinge of humour. A well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
I'll just have to say them I guess And hope that beside the great masters My efforts will not be in vain, excellent penning
In the light of their thorough address, Yet my thoughts cry out for expression; I'll just have to say them I guess And hope that beside the great masters........../// an inquisitive and philosophic touching poem; love it
Stunning and captivating expression. Beautiful poem on anticipation and humor.I want to quote some lines here.. . My efforts will not be in vain, And somewhere in the ages hereafter Someone will read them again And see the need through my prism And somehow recognize why Those words were torn from the bosom Of one so unworthy as I. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Neatly Written poem by Adeline Foster, Heart Touching.