Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Sunday, December 2, 2018

Time Passes Comments

Rating: 5.0

His hair and beard are streaked with gray.
Just how long has he been that way?
He's much too young to look like that.
It seems like only yesterday
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Kim Barney
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Kim Barney 31 January 2022

That guy in the picture is former POTUS, George W. Bush, not my former student.

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Rebecca Navarre 12 December 2018

Ever so heartfelt, beautifully penned! .. Looking back on when.. But all the more wiser with more beauty inside! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Maryellen Smith 05 December 2018

Excellent poem with a very interesting rhyme pattern. I don't think I've ever seen that before.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2018

interesting poem/// nice

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 December 2018

Superb presentation and conceptualization. Thanks for sharing.

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Kim Barney 02 December 2018

No, the guy in the picture is not my former student!

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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