Time: Thou Art A Scorpion! Poem by Aftab Alam

Time: Thou Art A Scorpion!

Rating: 4.5


Stung many a time to know
Whether I am alive or not.

Taken my childhood and youth
To weaken me, taken my beloved
Though I am weak yet I'm firm.
No storm can deter me, my path
I know the best, and thy wrath
I will change into a lovely flower
Alone I stood on the pyre of truth

Friday, May 24, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An appeal from the people of the world/Youth of the Earth will fetch the peace and Earth will be as beautiful as ever
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 26 May 2013

a clean poem with robust confi.......it is better without the last couplet...8..

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Valsa George 25 May 2013

The scorpion of time can't sting you! Braving the arrows of life, you will move ahead! ! A very positive approach to life! A highly elevating thought and a beautiful poem! !

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