That's How Sun Dies Poem by Aftab Alam

That's How Sun Dies

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When all birds flew back to nest, for rest,
Sinking sun into west when floated very fast
Heavy hands and hazy mind when lost its zest,
Then I am quite sure, he is losing vigor bast,

With blurred future and present that pain,
Yet enjoys with the horror of the lovely past,
'What are my loss and what are my gain? '
These thoughts whisper; he is breathing last,

Saturday, October 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 18 October 2014

A great thoughtful poem

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Louis Rams 18 October 2014

the sun breathes its last breath as the moonlit night covers its face.

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Hazel Durham 19 October 2014

Very moving, as his last thoughts of his life flash before him he lets go of the pain he endured at times and his glory days as his soul moves into eternity! Beautiful write!

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Shabeeh Haider 18 October 2014

Beautifully and elegantly described. Loved this poem Have a look at my poems as well

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Babatunde Aremu 18 October 2014

Great write! Reflections on our gains and loses in life is common. Thanks fos sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 December 2015

Nice work with the muse of nature! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Heather Wilkins 30 October 2014

something lost something gained enjoyed the read

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 27 October 2014

A good life thought poem the poet created and I likes it.

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Ging Taping 22 October 2014

And everything happens for a reason but the reason is still a mystery until it happen. -ging-

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Sallam Yassin 21 October 2014

What has lost and what has gained that is eternal question and you brightly profoundly projected

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