Tinted Thoughts.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Tinted Thoughts....

Rating: 5.0


I do not repeat, that everything is ultimately intertwined
I am not saying that most rivers have an artistic bend
all wines imported from France
have a special perfumed fragrance?

Do you know that?
the life of a person
is a constant struggle
between love, life, death and smuggle?

The life of a person
is usually between man and woman
on the one hand, it´s oft hellish earth
but that life is worth it
since on the other hand golden trumpets are chiming

not my life, that hellish fact
about that act of that man and woman
we still have a better choice
know the Lord and start to rejoice

pray every day as if your life depended upon it, practice as much as you can
confess every sin that you have trespassed
sin is not devoid here, even if you are a wise man
taciturn eyes, source of uncharted pains
taciturn eyes, source of uncharted sufferings

I do not repeat, that everything is ultimately intertwined
love, life, death and smuggle
likewise life is so most sublime either
yet, our life on earth is a constant struggle….


©Sylvia Frances Chan
Anno DominiWednesday the 15th of May 2019

Wednesday, May 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
pray every day as if your life depended upon it,
practice as much as you can
confess every sin that you have trespassed
sin is not devoid here, even if you are a wise man
taciturn eyes, source of uncharted pains
taciturn eyes, source of uncharted sufferings

I do not repeat, that everything is ultimately intertwined
love, life, death and smuggle
likewise life is so most sublime either
yet, our life on earth is a constant struggle….


©Sylvia Frances Chan
Anno DominiWednesday the 15th of May 2019-
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 09 August 2019

Thank you so much, dear Bernard, for your constant support and visit. Most appreciated!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 August 2019

I do not repeat, that everything is ultimately intertwined love, life, death and smuggle likewise life is so most sublime either yet, our life on earth is a constant struggle...............thank you dear Jez. my poet friend for your precious comment and visit. I appreciate that so much!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 May 2019

A remarkable Rhyme Royale, dear Ma'am Sylvia............10+++++++++++

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Indeed, a remarkable Rhyme Royale, eventhough only two rhyming end words, that is for me Rhyme Royale already. I have to spare them these days, they are seldom to find. Thank you so much for your precious note, Rev. Bernard. Thank you too for the 10+++++++++++. G.B.U.

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