To Awake Poem by Smoky Hoss

To Awake

Rating: 5.0


So many faces in the lines
on the ceiling above my bed,
I lay here seeing
autostereograms created in my head.
Moonlight shines through the shade
painting a perfect picture on the wall,
soft, gentle sounds come calling
from an open window down the hall.
In the calm of night, all seems right, but
in the terrible still of dark, I hear voices,
past ghosts pondering
life's many irretrievable choices.
Perhaps simply a mistake of mind, or
a trick of ear,
possibly a culmination of misgivings
brought upon myself, year after year.
These many questions come
with answers I know I cannot know,
I only listen to the dream...
saying, "Awake, and go."

So whether in a dream of sleep, or
longing when awake,
I must follow the call, if only
for the voices sake.
Hoping to discover that this journey
is not really fey,
rather a wayward path going home,
and not alone...
communally a finding, of our way.

Sunday, April 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: awakening
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 15 April 2020

sojourners we are, smoky. and we'll never lack for questions or mysteries. i just keep doing what i've been given to do and pray for God's will to be done and for me to trust him for it. -glen

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 April 2020

So many faces you observe but still you feel the wonder. Still wee hope to discover a journey in dream or sleep. This poem is very interestingly penned.

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Kostas Lagos 06 April 2020

Well written poem Smoky!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 April 2020

A well thought amazing poem.....10+++

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