To Embrace Her Beau Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

To Embrace Her Beau



She, born of height, cradled by lofty crest,
Mothered by mounts, reared by many a brook,
Dancing down sprightly as spring, still modest,
Oft hiding hind hillocks in cranny's nook,
In no time to resurface once again
A new avatar, a wide-mouth waterfall,
Cascading down and in utter disdain,
Meandering river to be in thrall,
And at long last to be an estuary,
Sprawling, shallow, wide-mouth and slower still,
Destined to embrace sea, fulfilled to be—
But O poet, there's option, nor self-will!
She's no maid rushing forth to embrace sea,
A maiden made O more of poetry.
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Rivers are painted in fancy by poets, the most common being a bride rushing sprightly down to meet her beau, the sea— gliding over the plain truth: water flows down seeking gravity.
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Sonnets | 02.02.12 |
Topic: river, sea

Wednesday, October 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: sea,river
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 October 2019

So beautiful after 4 lines you may like to leave a gap SONNETS ARE WONDERFUL BUT I HAVE NO TACT SO MANY CONSTRAINS AT THAT TACTA THIS TACTA THAT PP ME YU R FOR SONNETS FLAT

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Although I get the hang of what you say, there always remains something unfathomable in your comments. Now this: 'after 4 lines you may like to leave a gap'. Pray can you throw some PP light on it? But first thank you for calling this sonnet 'so beautiful'.

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Anjandev Roy 31 October 2019

An absolute gem. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Thank you for reading this 'absolute gem' dear poet, and calling it so, I'm honoured.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2019

A beautiful poem with thrilling expression is well executed. Nice penmanship. Lofty theme. Thank you for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Thanks indeed for visiting, reading, and finding it good enough dear poet KM.

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Kostas Lagos 30 October 2019

This poem goes to my list! Thanks friend!

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Thank you dear Kostas Lagos for visiting this poem of old recently revised, and to place it in 'My Poems List.

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