Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

To Maintain The Brightness Of The Dots - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

The best way to keep in touch,
With those who drift out of it?
Is to keep those announcements updated,
Of a new variety of crayons being offered...
To maintain the brightness of the dots,
Recommended to keep them awake and connected.
That is the only way they will follow a picture...
Colorized to sustain their acceptance.
Otherwise...
They will fall asleep just to awaken again,
To hear what has already been explained...
And defined.
With a falling behind to waste more time.


Comments about To Maintain The Brightness Of The Dots by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Hans Vr (1/26/2012 5:23:00 PM)


    I thnk this poem is inspiring. Open fo r multiple interpretations. Well written. When I look at the number (12686) , really impressed (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 26, 2012



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