Cristina Teodor

Rookie - 27 Points (18.11.1973 / Romania)

To Me Tou Are A Forbidden Love - Poem by Cristina Teodor

When i close my eyes and think,
I remember the dreams that i had,
Against all memories and past,
To me you are a forbidden love.

I remember my dreams that i had,
I wish i could stop the time,
So i can get back in my past,
And fix what i destroyed.

Against all memories and past,
I'm same woman, i'll never change,
Only your love made me understand one thing,
I gave it all i had the best in me.

To me you are forbidden love,
Against all memories and past,
I remember the dreams that i had,
When i close my eyes to think.


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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (1/1/2012 3:25:00 PM)

    To me you are forbidden love,
    Against all memories and past,
    I remember the dreams that i had,
    When i close my eyes to think................

    eyes meanders to dream bygone
    yet it heaves to tear in reminiscence....ingenious yet emotive and evocative too,10++, thanks for sharing
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  • Mohammad MuzzammilMohammad Muzzammil (12/31/2011 9:16:00 PM)

    very attractive poem that is rich in both expression and emotion.Words are very simple but it contains great matter. Your lines-
    I remember my dreams that i had,
    I wish i could stop the time,
    So i can get back in my past,
    And fix what i destroyed.
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  • Hammad Tahir (12/31/2011 3:54:00 PM)

    Against all memories and past,
    I'm same woman, i'll never change, , , , these are best best lines in that poem, , , its nice to read, , , , and shows how strong your passion is, , , , no matter what u got from love but u r same, , ,
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  • Hans VrHans Vr (12/15/2011 7:31:00 PM)

    Very nice poem Cristina.
    Every nice experience and every hardship in our life is perhaps a lesson we needed to learn. It is so extremely important that often we just take the time to close our eyes and think. So much wisdom in this fantastic poem.
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  • Narayanan Ramakrishnan (12/2/2011 5:03:00 AM)

    wonderful poem that will ring in my ears, for time to come. Narayanan Ramakrishnan (Report)Reply

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  • Vipins PuthooranVipins Puthooran (12/2/2011 4:35:00 AM)

    'Tis a true-poem!
    I could read your mind and soul throu' this excellent poem...
    I like this poem..10+++++
    VIPINS
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  • Rekha Mandagere (11/29/2011 8:36:00 AM)

    Friend, wonderful display of heartfelt feelings. One should build up the present on the edifice of great values and experiences of the past. Beautiful poem-Rekhamandagere (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (11/25/2011 9:06:00 AM)

    You write with your soul and that why i can feel so much real things here like i experienced it by myself..Sometimes we hope past not exist but we cant deny we have gone through with that road..Never turn back just walk ahead..Keep the nice work Christina! _Unwritten Soul (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 25, 2011



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