To My Love....With Agony Poem by Preetam Shetty

To My Love....With Agony

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I remember the day I met you
Such moments in my life are few
That was the day I realized
To a barren heart you came as dew

I glanced at your beautiful face
Something my whole life, I would love to gaze
And when you smiled to greet
I felt that our hearts did meet

To me you came as a boon
As a shadow in a hot burning noon
But then I didn’t realize
I shall face the reality soon

You smilingly held a hand
That even the divine feared to take
And today is when I feel
You made a big mistake

Sometimes when I see you in my dream
I hear my soul scream
I can hardly get you water
But my angel you deserve cream

I want you to go away
Far from darkness, in a beautiful day
I want to see you in a life
Where in happiness you can sway

The thought of losing you makes me cry
To get you the world I did try
Just to find my destiny shy
But darling I swear, my love for you was never a lie

I know when you are gone
My life will never see another dawn
But rather than bringing you despair
Its better I take the death chair.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gita Ashok 20 May 2010

Good use of metaphors in this one.

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Amy Martin 18 May 2010

This is such a beautiful poem so meaniful and expressive thankyou for sharing this poem gave me goosebumps :) x

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Anonymous Butterfly 14 May 2010

I like the second stanza: I glanced at your beautiful face Something my whole life, I would love to gaze And when you smiled to greet I felt that our hearts did meet This piece is absolutely wholly romantic, sad and separation. And its full of emotion and longing. Have a nice day. B.B.

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