To Paraphrase Something God Once Said(For Frieda Rose) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

To Paraphrase Something God Once Said(For Frieda Rose)

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Love

like voodoo
I

conjure you
from forgotten things.

Here a slip
spilt in satin

on seventh step of the stars

here a froth
of panties

pooled upon
the floor

a swan sailing on
its own reflection

there a silk stocking
reclining over

the arm of an arm
chair

here the other
sliding down the banister

& now a pink
high heeled shoe

precariously clinging
as if it had climbed there

to the mirror

finding your reflection
soaking in suds

smiling: “Mmmmmm...hello hon! ”

“I’m almost
out of my mind

for a cool glass
of wine

...do you mind? ”

“Be a pet
& get it! ”

You got it

purring like a cat
as I sponge your back

spoon feeding you
prawns & avocado pears.

I amazed
at this being

that love
has made

from such scrips & scraps
of scattered clothes

this my beloved
woman

in whom
I am

well pleased

to paraphrase
something that God once said.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Dee Wright 09 June 2008

This is just sumptious. Love all the attention to delicious detail that conjures her up. You cast a spell with your magical words. Magical! love Dee Dee

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Onelia Avelar 07 June 2008

I like the first lines very much and the title, God and voodoo are mixed in a very afro-gospel weird way

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God speaks well. :) t x

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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