To Whom Do I Compare....? Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

To Whom Do I Compare....?

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To Whom Do i Compare?

To whom do i compare my love?
My love for you.

To whom do i compare your love?
your love for me.

we agree we will never ever compare with others,
never ever,
your true love for me,
my true love for you,
never ever,

your innocence
as man,
as a twen,
my innocence
as woman,
as a teen,

who has foreseen,
that we still love each other,
of course the one as the other,
you are not his brother,
i am not his relative,

what if
what if
our truth awakens,
and it will kill our loves....?

Please, my children, my loves,
you both are fully mistaken,
on this earth forsaken,

The Truth is One,
My Truth,
My Words,
never both your truths nor words,
shall I give you advice?

Never compare true love,
just enjoy and still love each other,

since I am Love,
I can advise you both,
to whom do you both compare your love for each other,
with none and never,

I am here forever,
for you both and for the rest of the world,

you both have only to listen,
with your big ears,
you need only to remember,
with your intelligent mind,
you need only to see,
with your bright eyes,

watch the daily
blessings,
great and small,
I give them all to you both,
you only need to pay attention,
there's no explanation,
nor exploitations,
and no translations,

since I am as I AM,
as long as the world exists, I am perpetually
as the One who loves you unconditionally,
as the One who always forgives you,
every time you ask me in your daily prayers,
indeed, I am as I am, your God and your Saviour,
in heaven and upon earth,
for ever,
perpetually,
eternally,
in each ofyour both insides....

My great thanks for reading

©Sylvia Frances Chan
Wednesday 4 March 2020-
Dutch Noon.

To Whom Do I Compare....?
Wednesday, March 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,prayers,trust,believe,blessings,eternity,faith,forgiveness,god,wonder
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
since I am as I AM,
as long as the world exists, I am perpetually
as the One who loves you unconditionally,
as the One who always forgives you,
every time you ask me in your daily prayers,
indeed, I am as I am, your God and your Saviour,
in heaven and upon earth,
for ever,
perpetually,
eternally,
in each ofyour both insides....

My great thanks for reading

©Sylvia Frances Chan
Wednesday 4 March 2020-
Dutch Noon.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 04 March 2020

To Whom Do i Compare? To whom do i compare my love? My love for you. To whom do i compare your love? your love for me.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2020

As long as the world exists, love exists and this no one can deny. Love is incomparable. Love is eternal. Love we should feel with beauty of mind and perception. Love is significant and love is extra-ordinary. Love has its own glow. Love has its own dignity. Love has its own respect. We judge love unconditionally. Selfless love is regarded as the best love.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2020

God is saviour and God is beauty giver. God has great sympathy and beautiful theme for us to motivate life and his unconditional duty allows us to grow towards success. This love is felt within inner core. We pay attention and we feel the truth. Inside mind we feel this inner consequence. This poem is very interestingly penned with greater responsibility. Thank you very much for sharing this...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2020

One should not compare with another. Every person has his own responsibility and dignity. Every person is unique. There is no need to give explanation. Love is well explained through beautiful mindset and unified consequence. This poem is interestingly penned with notion and motion. Love makes us emotional.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2020

Love should not be mistaken. Love is truth and love is devotion. Love has greater responsibility and reflection. Love motivates mind and love unifies the living style and we proceed ahead towards God. We balance heaven and Earth and we feel the status of inner awakening. This poem is very interesting and nice.

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M Asim Nehal 26 August 2020

A big 10+++++for this wonderful poem, Madam Chan.

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M Asim Nehal 26 August 2020

Wow, this is one of your best poems I have read on the topic Love, First line reminded me as under: 1. The Great William Shakespeare : Shall I Compare Thee To A Summer's Day? 2. My own poem: Comparison a futile thought: If I compare your charm with moonbeam This poem is so powerful to defend the two lovers in unique ways that nothing can surpass between them. I quote: since I am as I AM, as long as the world exists, I am perpetually, as the One who loves you unconditionally...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2020

This heart touching poem deserves full 10 point and I have rated already. A beautiful photo is chosen as the cover photo. Forgiving is a good quality. We should feel inner sens of expression and explore the duty and truth. This is treasured with time...Thank you.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 March 2020

The comparison of mortal love with the Divine Love has been wonderfully conveyed by the great Poetess that the love of God shines to all mankind, capturing His all encompassing and eternal love. Liked the ultimate stanza which is as powerful as the opening stanza. Onto my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 March 2020

What a wonderful poem of faith. One of your best spiritual write. Liked the title and opening lines. Powerful and touching lines that strike right at the heart. So beautifully conveyed.

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