Today the sun rose, as it used to do
When its mission was to shine on you.
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Perfect. Absolutely perfect. Few poets know when to stop writing- they keep penning more words which take the glow away from the perfect lines. Awesomely written and awesomely terminated in the right place
- In Italian: Oggi Anche oggi il sole è sorto, come faceva Quando aveva la missione di brillare su di te. Ma dal momento che sei scomparsa nell'inesorabile tenebra, Quale mai può essere, ora, lo scopo del sole?
What can I say that the others have not. A brilliant piece, Daniel. Thanks
This is an emotion felt by many that you have captured so well in a few words. Great write, keep writing.
Mission has to shine on you as aroused sun does in day. Wonderful presentation really.
Beautiful Sad Such a few words to express so much Great read Great write Thanks BB
Robots who read poetry are a curse.