Today I Sat To Collect My Tears Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

Today I Sat To Collect My Tears

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I sat to collect my tears
in an earthern cup
and hid it carefully
behind my smiling mask.

I hid my sufferings and grinned
at everyone on the way.

They thought i am happy
but it was a simple lie.

I hid behind my mask
my painful bleeding heart.

Everything is torninside me.

They saw only my mask.

The memory of those who
cheated me purposely
carved my soul and heart.
I cried silently and prayed.

My prayer to christ was:

Thank you Lord for helping
me to join in your passion.

They crucified me and i bleed.

Today i want to pray:
„God forgive them", but
I am a simple human being.
Please give me your forgiving mind.

Saturday, October 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: crying,forgiveness,hiding,jesus,mind,prayer,smiling,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 29 October 2017

Tony, I just read this for the first time. The first stanza is striking—that is poetry! ! ! Good stuff! Forgiving, letting go, can be a challenge. Don’t know if you’re familiar with Corrie Ten Boom or her book The Hiding Place. Her Dutch family hid Jews from the Nazis and was caught and sent to a concentration camp. A big part of her story was forgiving their concentration camp tormentors. She came to the Albuquerque premier of the movie based on her book. As I recall she likened holding on to hurts like stuffing rags into a flash light. She encouragingly talked about forgiveness being a decision to let go before God. This was the important thing. Reminders of the hurt would likely come back, but the decision had been made which we recall and stand by as they do. This helped me. Who of us, thinking of the Lord’s prayer, would want anyone else to bear a grudge against us into eternity? Be well, brother. Glen

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 October 2017

Thank you very much dear Glen for your thought provoking comment. yes.. forgiving is not easy especially when the wounds are deep.. thank u dear brother in the Lord Jesus Christ

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Bharati Nayak 28 October 2017

I sat to collect my tears in an earthern cup and hid it carefully behind my smiling mask. I hid my sufferings and grinned at everyone on the way. They thought i am happy but it was a simplelie. - - - - - - - A profound poetic expression of your pains. Hiding pains behind a smile is not easy. In the last stanza your kind heart forgives those who hurt you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 October 2017

thank you dear Bharathi .. thank you very much. we as poets shall encourage all the others to forgive and forget............ thank you.. tony

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Jeanette Telusma 28 October 2017

As a reader, I can't help but feel the poet's emotions shared. A well expressed and honest write. Towards the end he is grateful for sharing in Christ suffering. Wow.... so profound, thanks for sharing. Added to my favs.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 October 2017

thank u dear Jean......... yes we shall forget and forgive. it is a heavenly act.. tony

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Superb writing, expressing forgiveness in a beautiful way Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 October 2017

thank you dear poet Mario for your lovely words of encouragement.. tony

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Rini Shibu 28 October 2017

Heartfelt poem of bleeding heart. A beautiful heart which is able to forgive the people who cheated.. Superb lines

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 October 2017

thank you dear poetess Rini for your comments on my bleeding heart, it really bleeds and then to forgive...........is the challenge. more than writing about it we shall forgive in real terms. thank you

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