Togetherness Poem by Ernestine Northover
Togetherness
The years roll by from girl to woman,
The years roll by from boy to man,
Then one of them will find the other,
A 'fusion' part of God's great plan.
For this Bride and Groom are on an adventure,
Which will sometimes give a bumpy ride,
But they will travel well the journey,
As long as they stay, side by side.
There's love, joy, smiles and laughter,
There's happiness along life's way,
We wish them a path that is calm and peaceful,
As they proclaim their vows today.
We wish them health along life's highway,
We wish them blessings from above,
We wish them God's own hand to guide them,
That their life together be filled with love.
You have a poetic form that carries the poem forward, but I don't think you had to risk much of yourself to write this poem. The real poetry is in the pain, in the struggle to make togetherness happen in a time when it is so difficult. If you want to be a better poet, aim for the pain, not the pleasant solution. We put poems out here hoping for positive responses, and others may love this, and I like to get a good response to bathe my ego in acceptance, but I would also like to be useful. I hope you don't take this the wrong way. That's my two cents.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 8:50:10 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Your words are very thoughtful and carry a prayer.God Bless you both.Love Duncan