Omar Osman Jabak

Rookie (01/04/1973 / Syria)

Tokens Of Love - Poem by Omar Osman Jabak

What gift can I give her in token of my love?
It should be something most women think of!
Something like a book, a perfume, or a rose.
She can read the book wherever she goes.
When she reads the book, my love grows
My name shall be on every page she reads.
It's not the book; it's my love she heeds.
I know women like perfumes so much.
I think a small bottle will be a nice touch.
Every time she wears some, I'll be around.
The scent she smells will keep her bound.
I think a rose or two will be a great gift!
As women, we know, identify with it.
It could be red, yellow, white or pink.
A rose of any color is a joy they think.
I think a book, a perfume and a rose.
Shall bear witness to my noble cause.

18/10/2014

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Tokens Of Love by Omar Osman Jabak

  • Bruce Springsteen (6/8/2019 9:10:00 AM)

    What is the poetic device used (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (11/23/2015 2:16:00 AM)

    Sometimes honest words from deepest inside is the rare treasure u can give for the best gift to the ones u loved most... Because it stay in mind forever even if u gone and even all the tangible gift vanish... (Report)Reply

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  • Patricia GranthamPatricia Grantham (4/3/2015 8:51:00 PM)

    Very sweet and energetic. A well deserved poem of the day.
    I enjoyed this poetry of love. Endearing.
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  • Kim BarneyKim Barney (4/3/2015 3:47:00 PM)

    Sure, give her all three. Why not?
    My wife only likes one brand of perfume, and only certain kinds of books, but just about any flowers!
    Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
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    Omar JabakOmar Jabak(4/3/2015 6:45:00 PM)

    This was what I did! I think she deserves much more! Thank you for sharing your lovely experience with me.

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (4/3/2015 12:22:00 PM)

    Love begets love. A token of love is a love indeed. Book, perfume or a flower of rose, they all will translate into one thing i.e. love. So, don't worry, a loving heart will recognise the feelings carried by the undercurrents of a gift Thanks for such a nice poem. (Report)Reply

    Omar JabakOmar Jabak(4/3/2015 6:46:00 PM)

    Thank you for your beautiful comment. Yeah, when you love someone, everything you say, do or get is a token of love.

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  • Panmelys PanmelysPanmelys Panmelys (4/3/2015 5:24:00 AM)

    A lovely gift to the Lady you love; nice work and easy flow. Love cannot fail to please, its life's highest tribute,
    and no matter about all the hate surrounding us, loving kindness and goodness will always win the race. Though bringing up children needs more than love, constant attention to their many needs must also be carefully watched, as they grow into young adults, taking the wrong path can be so painful to many who have put so much love into their upbringing: yet we must never give up trying to do our best, said so well by Kelly. Panmelys Thanks for sharing.
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    Omar JabakOmar Jabak(4/3/2015 6:32:00 AM)

    Thank you Pamela for your nice comment! I think those who love will spread love wherever they go....

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (10/18/2014 10:30:00 AM)

    Just be heart and love because it gives purely permanent touch (Report)Reply

    Omar JabakOmar Jabak(10/18/2014 10:44:00 AM)

    Yeah, you are right we should love with all our heart and that will be a great gift!

    Omar JabakOmar Jabak(10/18/2014 10:43:00 AM)

    Yeah, you are right we should love with all our heart!

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  • Aftab Alam KhursheedAftab Alam Khursheed (10/18/2014 10:08:00 AM)

    Now whole world is suffering with inferno act, somewhere some problem in bringing up a kid The gift we must offer- Holy Quran..that will fetch the garden of heaven and earth will be peace land of humanity.. nice romanticism thank you (Report)Reply

    Omar JabakOmar Jabak(10/18/2014 10:47:00 AM)

    Thank you for your special reading into my poem. I am glad you liked it.

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (10/18/2014 8:36:00 AM)

    A nice piece, well articulated and nicely penned. The items outlined are indeed very romantic gift to a lady. Lovely. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report)Reply

    Omar JabakOmar Jabak(10/18/2014 10:48:00 AM)

    Thank you for your kind comment.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 18, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 18, 2014


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