I turn around and walk away -
Tomorrow is another day,
The past is done, I've closed the book,
I'll never take another look;
You've had your fun, you played your part,
You stole my love then broke my heart
So easily without a care,
How could you leave me standing there?
I thought 'twas sadness in your eyes,
I couldn't see through your disguise,
I should have known you were untrue -
I was in love, why weren't you?
Perhaps I've learned the sorry truth
I should have listened in my youth,
A broken heart will surely mend -
Some loves will last, and some will end,
And I will play the game again
Because I know one day I'll win,
But now I turn and walk away.............
Tomorrow is another day.
7/5/2008
I gave this one an 8 as well. Another recommendation. The rhymes were more simple in this poem and therefore the poem itself was, I thought at least, a little less than it might have been. The sentiment seemed to be less intense than it needed to be. Other than that, I found nothing to find fault with. GW62
Is life simply a quest for the unattainable? And tomorrow....is....another day!
'A broken heart will surely mend - Some loves will last, and some will end, And I will play the game again Because I know one day I'll win' life is essentially a love game...the lines above give the basic rule for playing that game...the poem declares brave optimism
Tomorrow is another day, 'tis exactly as you say *10*! ! The past, now you have closed the book Tomorrow you'll take a closer look Deeply Into your new loves eyes And you will find true loves (not blind) True love you can't disguise! Splendid read Linda Friend Thad
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brilliant poem Linda, i just wish my heart was made that way! regards Bob!