! Unfinished Business Poem by Linda Ori

wow Linda...this is not an unfinished business..this is a never ending love affair...great feelings and bright tomorrow

That last stanza is so classy... well, so is the entire piece. Perfect rhyme and rhythm. t x

Great title, great poem; loved it... thank you for sharing. HG: -) xx

Very nicely put, Thanks for shareing this one. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

Ahhh, l'amour et fantastique! And so is this poem, MIDNIGHT...You continue to stun me, as i know of no opne elsen that could write quality verse....stop on a dime for weeks, on end....then start back up while never missing a beat during the downtime! You are the gal! Ecrivez tres bon, Madamoiselle Midi! P.S....THANK YOU for your continued reads & comments.You know how much i appreciate it, Linda.I also got your message, and i will be in touch A.S.A.P.... Gots to go, whew! Frank

again i like this one.. you know why i like these poems best, cause these poems reflect what kind of sweet, darling person you are.... people here say i m darling sweet person too.., but not many know how am i when i am angrymmmm.... anyway writing poems always helps to let my emotions out and reading stuff like this can cleanse sore hearts too........ with lots of love shan

Circumstances too often dictate what we will do rather what we weould like to do

There is a bittersweet beauty in this, as there is in all of your recent writing, that goes straight to the heart... maybe we're at similar places - maybe you're younger than your age and I'm older than mine -.. I don't know.. but this touched me deeply.. there is a strong and positive air about the final verse, and yet there is something fragile, delicately balanced about the whole. I'm often reminded of Will Barber's style when I read your work... a poet who, who like yourself, has mastered the art of touching hearts deeply with deceptively simple looking poems. xxx

Linda, nice piece of work....don't think I found any of your poems I didn't like...still looking tho, lol

A class act as usual. no faults in the scanning, as usual, and entertaining...as usual. very well done.