Lora Colon

Gold Star - 11,848 Points (26 September 1944 / Missouri - United States)

Too Busy Loving You - Poem by Lora Colon

I was too busy loving you
To ever notice the signs....
The ice forming on the river,
The snow gathering in the pines

So busy was I loving you,
I didn't notice the smoke,
The fire had burned out long ago,
There are no embers left to stoke

And then there was that lovely rose
You and I planted in the Spring,
While I was busy loving you
I failed to see it withering

To our garden, without warning,
Came a killing frost one night,
Too busy was I loving you
To foresee the approaching blight

Now my tears frost the window pane,
The ice keeps you from my view,
How could I not see this coming!
I was too busy loving you

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Too Busy Loving You by Lora Colon

  • Kassem Oude (12/2/2015 1:58:00 PM)


    Bad Weird
    I intended to nestle in lush spring
    Dreaming to brim heart of all lures
    Severe storm stole my lovely ring
    It turned me moaning troubadour.
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  • (12/1/2015 1:55:00 PM)


    A lovely poem, Lora. Blinded by love...Utopia, , , , , , then reality, the fire had gone out. Cleverly crafted, perfect rhythm and rhyme. I really like this one. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (12/1/2015 1:33:00 PM)


    Lora,
    I love this one! Well-written, indeed. I am going to add it to my favorites list.
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  • Shakil Ahmed (12/1/2015 11:19:00 AM)


    a well presented thought, well composed poem, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Claudine Riel (12/1/2015 11:16:00 AM)


    Beautifully put together. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 1, 2015



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