Too Late Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Too Late

Rating: 5.0

‘Whore! ' he kicked her
As she lay on the kitchen floor
And he knew well that
She only whored him.

The child on her bosom
Whined and wept aloud.
'Tell me, who fathered
This vermin of yours' he said.
And he knew the butterfly
Was his own blood.

The noose of her torn sari
Held tight on her neck
The other half still tied
To the roof beam above.

Then it dawned on him
Like the rain that poured
Over the river outside-
She heard nothing he said
And will never again.

That morning too, she had
Handed him some money
Left from her wages and said,
'Have tea and go to work! '
That morning too, he had
Ended up in the arrack shop.
Now he was back right from there
Hungry and his pockets empty.

A stone he picked up
And aimed at the sinner.
As the child cried again
he heard His words,
'Let no sinner cast the stone'.

He tore the stone from his own hand
And threw it fast over the river sand
As His Kingdom rose from
Beneath the dark of his heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alyx True Edge 30 October 2024

A truthfully caring counterpart and a destroyer of humanity, as so many are. Living in illusions moulded by escaping truth, results are always sad. Allegoric intensity, unique 5/5

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M.J. Lemon 04 March 2024

This verse is just absolutely amazing!

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Thank you Dear Poet. But, alcoholism is a universal menace and need to be addressed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 March 2024

What a deeply touching and poignant write. A brilliant depiction of utter evilness. So revolting. Superb images! To my favorites.

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The "utter evilness " lies the addiction to alcohol and drugs, which is a menace worldwide….thank you Rose Marie

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 03 March 2024

Your heartfelt poem is both touching and sad.

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The plight of many families, where a member of the family is addicted to alcohol or drugs, is ‘both touching and sad'. Many societies address these issues head on. Many ignore. Some rulers make illegal money from such degradation in the society he is responsible for.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2024

A marvellous poem. Liked the line: 'Artificial plants to continue the oxygen cycle in the space ship, By all means to God's home it was a safe and sure human trip'. Top score and to my favourite!

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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