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Tortured Artist

Rating: 5.0
Black dog ascending
Full moon now rising
Emotion descending
Life condescending
Friday, August 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,helplessness,struggle
Mj Lemon 18 August 2017
Richard, this one goes right to my favourites list. There is a great rhythm to this verse. There's a great, sly observation here, too. In a way, this is also about relationships. When something ascends, another element or thing descends. Life is a rhythm, life is a pattern. Nothing is static. Brilliant, Richard.
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Richard Wlodarski 19 August 2017
M.J., I am greatly honoured and humbled. Thank you so very much for your very insightful positive feedback. You really made my day! ! !
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Sandra Feldman 18 August 2017
Ups and Downs of Life But when we think of others strife Sometimes ours is not that bad..... However, your feelings are well presented in this poem and felt by the reader. The uselessness of it all......
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Richard Wlodarski 18 August 2017
As always, thank you for the poetic response, Sandra. And the beat goes on. And as we march to the beat of a different drummer, we conquer the uselessness of it all! !
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