Total Darkness Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Total Darkness

Rating: 5.0


Clouds crying
Stones sighing

Nightingales moaning
Gardens groaning

Sun shivering
Earth quivering

Lack of kindness
Total darkness

(2008/6/25)

Wednesday, June 25, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: gardens,kindness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 25 June 2008

Be not afraid of darkness, my friend. Even if it is total night. This only adds nobleness and fantastic sounds to a voice of a nightingale........10.... Tsira

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WILLIAM SIENES III 25 June 2008

i had visions in my head while i was reading this.... very good piece.

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M M 25 June 2008

A deeply sad poem whose beauty touches the emotions felt through your lines. 10

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Ron Flowers 21 October 2008

An excellent poem. Ron

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~ Jon London ~ 28 June 2008

Very deep persian..........the emotion burns through the page...10 best wishes Jon

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Thad Wilk 25 June 2008

A poignant and touching poem, perfect metaphors! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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... ... 25 June 2008

Very nice poems, my nightingale! Bravo! Your rose.

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Lynda Robson 25 June 2008

Excellent writing, a poem packed full of feelings, well done,10 Lynda xx

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