Total Darkness Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Total Darkness

Rating: 5.0


Clouds crying
Stones sighing

Nightingales moaning
Gardens groaning

Sun shivering
Earth quivering

Lack of kindness
Total darkness

(2008/6/25)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M M 25 June 2008

A deeply sad poem whose beauty touches the emotions felt through your lines. 10

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WILLIAM SIENES III 25 June 2008

i had visions in my head while i was reading this.... very good piece.

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Tsira Goge 25 June 2008

Be not afraid of darkness, my friend. Even if it is total night. This only adds nobleness and fantastic sounds to a voice of a nightingale........10.... Tsira

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Ron Flowers 21 October 2008

An excellent poem. Ron

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~ Jon London ~ 28 June 2008

Very deep persian..........the emotion burns through the page...10 best wishes Jon

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Thad Wilk 25 June 2008

A poignant and touching poem, perfect metaphors! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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... ... 25 June 2008

Very nice poems, my nightingale! Bravo! Your rose.

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Lynda Robson 25 June 2008

Excellent writing, a poem packed full of feelings, well done,10 Lynda xx

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