! Transformation! Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! Transformation!

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It is when the shadow of sun
fell on earth as a black dot
and in one July rain it spread
all over the silent surface of earth,
a word emerged to write
on the sheets of white paper
that it is one storm from a mighty
ocean can transform sun from
its original position even when
it remains in one static centre
stage and it is when nature
changed seasons it flowered
on earth as the grace of universe....



April 15,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 15 April 2009

compact and well done! ! ! ! !

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Gayatri Nambiar 15 April 2009

what if the Sun be centre to the world and other stars the planet Earth so steadfast though she seem, in sensibley three different montions move? , wherever you go on this planet earth, there is movement and life, even apparently inanimate things like rcks, metal, timber clay are full of intrinsic movement, what Abdul Kalam says is right.. good..

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 15 April 2009

u r indeed correct.. i like how u wrote it.. finely done.. bravo

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