Trapped Poem by Silly Artist

Trapped

Rating: 4.3


Have you ever thought that the world's a cage?
A place that immobilizes you?
The light to freedom is now gone.
For society bounds us,
Even when we're not wrong.
I wish to be free!
No longer bound,
Nor restrained.
No Longer...

Trapped

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Plumb Plumb 10 October 2014

I often feel like you do.

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 September 2011

A place that immobilizes you? Great definition of mobility another way when it accuses..

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Vipins Puthooran 21 September 2011

Yes, you are right... Sometimes Society trapping us... And we are not free.. Till death it will annoy us.. Nice poem

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Hans Vr 21 September 2011

Hi, Silly Artist, I really like your artist name. This poem is well written; it expresses an intense feeling and is thought provoking. Somehow all of us feel a bit trapped at many times. Society tries to mould us into conformity and it can feel really like suffocating. Non conformity is the source of innovation. Keep your non-conformity ideas alive, but be patient and wise in expressing them. At the same time we have to realise that absolute freedom perhaps does not exist. If we look at what slaves had to go through, I enjoy every moment of my trapped freedom. Good poem

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