Trapped Poem by Tiffany Baldwin

Trapped

Rating: 3.8


My body is numb all I can feel is my heart,

The thoughts in my head are sour and tart.

Starring off in a daze as my thoughts become void,

Every part of me as a person has been devoured and destroyed.

My body feels tired, I feel like my soul needs to rest,

I feel the blood bleeding out with every beat in my chest.

From the outside looking in, they see weakness, sadness, gloom and quiet.

From the inside I can't see out, I'm having delusions of my emotions in a riot.


The terminal velocity of the hurt that is causing so much ache,

I've been made to believe that I'm the serpent that ugly cold blooded snake.

I feel trapped inside this body, oh what I would give to break free,

To swim gracefully like the dolphin, and just become me.

Tuesday, December 11, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,snake,trapped,weakness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Owain Glyn 17 December 2012

This description of pain does you credit. Writing is very cathartic, but I guess you know that by now.

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Nikhil Sharma 14 December 2012

thats your best out of 3

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 13 December 2012

well written& the emotions expressed with words of pain............float, fly like eagle, above this mortal pain, through pen..... keep writing.....

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Tiffany Baldwin

Tiffany Baldwin

Arlington Heights, IL
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