Trapped Poem by Tiffany Baldwin

Trapped

Rating: 3.8


My body is numb all I can feel is my heart,

The thoughts in my head are sour and tart.

Starring off in a daze as my thoughts become void,

Every part of me as a person has been devoured and destroyed.

My body feels tired, I feel like my soul needs to rest,

I feel the blood bleeding out with every beat in my chest.

From the outside looking in, they see weakness, sadness, gloom and quiet.

From the inside I can't see out, I'm having delusions of my emotions in a riot.


The terminal velocity of the hurt that is causing so much ache,

I've been made to believe that I'm the serpent that ugly cold blooded snake.

I feel trapped inside this body, oh what I would give to break free,

To swim gracefully like the dolphin, and just become me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Owain Glyn 17 December 2012

This description of pain does you credit. Writing is very cathartic, but I guess you know that by now.

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Nikhil Sharma 14 December 2012

thats your best out of 3

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 13 December 2012

well written& the emotions expressed with words of pain............float, fly like eagle, above this mortal pain, through pen..... keep writing.....

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Tiffany Baldwin

Tiffany Baldwin

Arlington Heights, IL
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