john tiong chunghoo
Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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Travel Thailand Haiku - Jim Thompson Bangkok House

Rating: 3.5

Jim Thompson House
the house too
misses its owner

my eyes run up and down
left and right
for jim

Jim Thompson House
it is too waiting for

owner to be back
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Saturday, January 12, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: travel
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 12 January 2008

John, I am very interested in Haiku and find these very well done. However, since you included an explanation maybe they should be considered as Haibun.. This, of course, is only a technical point and really is not of much consequence.

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Ian Bowen 12 January 2008

John, thanks for the information. An enjoyable piece. Ian

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