Treasure Poem by Sandra Feldman

Treasure

Rating: 5.0


We all want to escape reality,
And be, what we cannot be
We all want the happiness,
That in others we see,
But don't let yourself
Be fooled,
Those that in the mirror
You see,
May also be
Unhappy, not wanting
What others, in them see.

Be happy with your lot
And try to make it better,
If love you've got,
That is the biggest
Treasure.

Friday, January 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 18 January 2019

Oh, I forgot to give this wonderful poem a 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++and much much more. I have only done what Bernard did here..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 January 2019

Excellent Poem, dear Poetess, indeed we must be happy with the love we've got. Absolutely! It can be only better IF we work on it to MAKE it better, these Blessings have come from God and that's a very lot, IF we try, we will always have success, that's The Bless, Oh YES! Your Bless is in the mirror in front of you, mine too in my mirror in front of me. Your TREASURE is a pleasure to read, dear Sandra. I have enjoyed very much this marvelous poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 January 2019

Love makes the world go round. A remarkable poem, dear Sandra...........10++++++++++++++

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