Triple Tetractys - Realities And Dreams Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Triple Tetractys - Realities And Dreams

Rating: 5.0


hard
bitter
a Learning
experience
as it shows the true colours of this life
it show the colourful things about life
far extended
than the real
truth of
facts
both
entwined
together
to make this life
meaningful, successful and a worthwhile

Friday, November 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,reality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The rules are little bit tough, Triple Tetractys must have following syllable for each lines: 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1,1,2,3,4, and 10. syllable
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 29 December 2018

Hard and worthwhile. Awesome poem

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 December 2018

Awesome, this form is very difficult to write.

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M Asim Nehal 22 January 2019

Thx Much Darren, ....

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Mihaela Pirjol 25 November 2018

Not only the Tetracys is a stunning visual format, but the profound and meaningful words it contains, makes this poem absolutely great!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 November 2018

A beautiful poem with an inbuilt message! Nicely penned my friend....10

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