True Feeling Poem by Luo Zhihai

True Feeling

Rating: 3.0

真情

一展春枝诗嫩绿
半舒柳眼画鲜浓
闲情洋溢功名外
真味沉浮茶酒中


True Feeling

Spring branches stretching
poems are green
The willow eye is half open
the painting is fresh and thick

The leisurely feelings overflowing outside fame and fortune
The true flavor ups and downs in wine and tea

4/7/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9851首对联体诗
The 9,851th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft) . The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains)in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.

Tuesday, April 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: spring,true,wine,feeling
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 27 April 2020

'poems are green' - To me, that is the best line of your poem.

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Luo Zhihai

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Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
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