Touch One Deeply In The Heart。 Poem by Luo Zhihai

Touch One Deeply In The Heart。

Rating: 4.9


Touch One Deeply In The Heart

The wind is soft and the sun is warm
the spring smoke and the green willows
the warblers are singing
The air is clear and the sky is high
the autumn wild geese and the red maples
the emotional tourists

Charming sincerity
water shows its shy posture and snuggles up to the moon
Lingering expectation
lotuses open their beautiful dimples and get drunk in the sound of lute

Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 11,248th Two Pairs of Couplets,1/9/2021


感人肺腑

风柔日暖,春烟绿柳莺啼曲
气爽天高,秋雁红枫客动情
妩媚真诚,水露羞姿依月色
缠绵期许,荷开秀靥醉琴声

格律體新詩●十一絕羅志海著譯
第11248首對聯體詩2021年1月9日

Friday, January 8, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: touch,one,heart,water,spring,autumn,moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 09 January 2021

lotuses open their beautiful dimples and get drunk in the sound of lute.....this is really beautiful.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 January 2021

A magnificent piece of poetry... touching expression! So elegantly crafted... Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being featured on the home page today as Poem of the Day! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 January 2021

Mesmerizing piece of breautiful Metric New Poetry, Mr. Luo Sir. I still remember you translated one of my poems, fantastic! CONGRATULATIONS for the great honour on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. I am very happy for you, Sir. Best wishes from Sylvia Frances Chan, the Netherlands

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 January 2021

5 Stars for this Beauty and to my Favourites.

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Lyn Paul 10 January 2021

You have expressed nature's beauty perfectly.

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Mihai Brinas 15 May 2021

A beautiful experience!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 April 2021

This beauty has been The Member Poem Of The Day too. How brilliantly written! Rural retreat and the lovely nature and the curious tourists, you said politely the EMOTIONAL tourists. Kindest utterance! Thank you that I may read once again this gem, a masterpiece!

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Mia Bird 20 April 2021

'lotuses open their beautiful dimples' Love it! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2021

Rereading again: still a Poetic Beauty

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David Wood 10 January 2021

A beautifully crafted poem of great magnitude.5*

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Luo Zhihai

Luo Zhihai

Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
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