The Green Mountain And The Flowing Water Poem by Luo Zhihai

The Green Mountain And The Flowing Water

Rating: 4.7

The Green Mountain And The Flowing Water

The red plum blossoms bloomed in the small spring
The green color dyed the slender willows
I drunkenly listened to the flowing water to play the poetry rhymes
I overlooked the green mountain to tremble its soul

(by Luo Zhihai)


青山流水

翠色染纤柳
红梅绽小春
醉听流水弹诗韵
远眺青山抖魄魂

格律体新诗 ● 罗志海著译
第二百四十四首长短句对联体诗 二零二一年六月二十八日

Monday, June 28, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: mountain,water,flow,listen,poetry,soul,flower,green,red
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 June 2021

wonferfully amazing! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 June 2021

I always like your nature's philosophical poems very much, they constantly form one whole, so simple yet so most beautiful

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 June 2021

I like all the lines as one poetic art poem. Thank you for sharing this Beauty, Mr. Luo Sir!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 June 2021

I overlooked the green mountain to tremble its soul I enjoyed this very poetic art in a foreign nature's landscape, BUT these words do touch my inside,5 Stars full for this brilliance as pinted in nature

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Luis A. Estable 28 June 2021

Not a bad nature poem. The last verse has something of impersonation. I like verse three the best. I think there is merit in this writing.

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Luo Zhihai

Luo Zhihai

Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
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