One breath
Twain sisters— trust and faith:
One stands if proof stays stood,
The ‘ther all lone in solitude
Till death.
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Cinquains | 03.07.14 |
A nice Cinquain on trust and faith is presented here impressively.You have rightly said " One breath Twin sisters— trust and faith: " Thanks for sharing.
Solitude! ! Gratitude, Servitude and attitude. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes, faith stands in solitude. Trust aligns with gratitude. It can also be blind servitude, and depends on personal attitude, you're right.
A fabulous Cinquain sir! There cab be no difference of opinion that trust and faith go together in one breath...the established truth! (10)
You are right they are twin sisters, but there is a difference. Trust comes only when there is some proof of trustworthiness. Faith can stand alone in solitude. Thank you Dr Swain
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent definition of 'trust and faith'...simple yet highly meaningful the expression...greatly impressed
Nice to hear such good words from a discerning poet like you, thank you.