Trust And Faith Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Trust And Faith

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One breath
Twain sisters— trust and faith:
One stands if proof stays stood,
The ‘ther all lone in solitude
Till death.
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Cinquains | 03.07.14 |

Thursday, June 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: trust,faith
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We often talk of trust and faith together in one breath. A twain of sisters they are, but see the difference.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 16 June 2019

Excellent definition of 'trust and faith'...simple yet highly meaningful the expression...greatly impressed

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 June 2019

Nice to hear such good words from a discerning poet like you, thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 June 2019

A nice Cinquain on trust and faith is presented here impressively.You have rightly said " One breath Twin sisters— trust and faith: " Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 June 2019

Thank you for the good words, Kumarmani M.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2019

Solitude! ! Gratitude, Servitude and attitude. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 June 2019

Yes, faith stands in solitude. Trust aligns with gratitude. It can also be blind servitude, and depends on personal attitude, you're right.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 June 2019

Typos: please read as: can

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 June 2019

A fabulous Cinquain sir! There cab be no difference of opinion that trust and faith go together in one breath...the established truth! (10)

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 June 2019

You are right they are twin sisters, but there is a difference. Trust comes only when there is some proof of trustworthiness. Faith can stand alone in solitude. Thank you Dr Swain

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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