Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Trying Again Comments

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Words stringed together in rhyme,
Simple melodies I have played
Or strings pulled
From my own mind...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Hans Vr 19 February 2012

The wisdom expressed here is wonderful. Another one of your really great poems, Romeo

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Lenore Lee 08 February 2012

Beautiful, I love the way nearly all of your poems are about being beaten down but never giving up hope and always continuing to have another try. That is exactly the human race's nature though, isn't it? You are an inspiration to those who have temporarily given up hope :)

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Marilyn Lott 28 January 2012

A very optomistic picture of what we do, isn't it? Refreshing and hopeful, very nice, Romeo. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Sajna Kailas 27 January 2012

A purpose that seemed secured Only yesterday but kept alive Hoping to be reborn tomorrow And find happiness at last... amazing lines! ! ! firm attitude about life! ! ! ! loved it friend Romeo! ! ! ! God bless you!

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Ramesh Rai 25 January 2012

nice poem. full of optimism

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Ace Of Black Hearts 23 January 2012

Almost always it takes more then one try. When the wind has been knocked out of your sails. Remember what brought you here. What was it that you believed. What was it you thought you could achieve. And then march on redeemed. Another great poem, one my many favorite poets.

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

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