Twenty And One More Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Twenty And One More

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I caught twenty
of your glances
and locked them in memory

two of them were duplicates
of a kiss flying in air.
it all hit me
with fading music so steep
you needed to hold my eyes
within patient caresses.

but it was the one more,
which took me...

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merc gabriell 08 April 2006

lovely! as always, your poems are a joy to read. bless you.

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