koyel mitra

Twilight

Twilight is majestic with a reddish-orange hue,
With all its heart it welcomes the night new;
Twilight is darker with dusk,
Night is but the dusk's husk;
Like a woman veiled in dim light it prepares itself for the night,
It can't stop the arrival of night with all its might;
It's like an apple-pie which the night slowly devours,
and finally night sets in with Nature's endeavours!

Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 4, 2008
Poem Edited: Thursday, September 4, 2008

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  • Rakhi Jayashankar (10/1/2008 2:53:00 AM)

    nature poems bring out the tenderness in our heart

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  • Edgar Andrade BaguioEdgar Andrade Baguio (9/27/2008 7:53:00 AM)

    Well connected words of thoughts....and the addressees following it delightfully..

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  • Reetessh Sabrr (9/26/2008 3:18:00 AM)

    imagination backed by super strength of words
    long way to go young poetess!

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  • Pushkar Bisht (9/23/2008 1:17:00 AM)

    Twilight is really beautiful. You have expressed best in your words. I enjoy it very much. Keep writting and bring the nature into the life again where people don't give much respect.

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  • Linda Moore (9/21/2008 8:51:00 AM)

    Lovely, very discriptive.....10

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  • ~*Lexi Baby*~ (9/19/2008 11:37:00 AM)

    Very nice write. I like it.

    Peace out,
    Lexi

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  • Reshma Ramesh (9/18/2008 7:22:00 AM)

    very nice loved it! ! !

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  • Elena ToledoElena Toledo (9/14/2008 8:06:00 PM)

    I loved this one, great job

    Elena

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  • Shannon D Smith (9/12/2008 7:43:00 PM)

    That was a wonderful a piece of art...Keep it up! !

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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (9/10/2008 8:34:00 PM)

    Another quality piece. Easily Koyal is one of the very best poets in the site....Keep writing these wonderful thoughts in your exquisitive style and mould......................my best wishes to a very very very good poet.......................................10

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  • Waqas Naeem (9/10/2008 9:49:00 AM)

    nicely penned verses...keep writing...

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  • Seema Chowdhury (9/9/2008 12:24:00 AM)

    a very nice composition.

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  • premji premjipremji premji (9/8/2008 3:12:00 AM)

    Beautifully composed lines
    with strong undercurrents...

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  • Sandra Fowler (9/7/2008 7:56:00 AM)

    Twilight is pure magic in both the East and West. Lovely poem.

    Kind regards,

    Sandra

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  • Marilyn LottMarilyn Lott (9/7/2008 7:38:00 AM)

    Twilight is one of my special times and love to write poems about it.
    You sketched us a picture, my friend, that was very vivid. Keep writing
    and sharing!

    Best Wishes,
    Marilyn

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  • Onelia Avelar (9/7/2008 3:52:00 AM)

    There is profundity in your twilight and you have a way with words. Very well penned.

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  • Tom BalchTom Balch (9/7/2008 3:36:00 AM)

    Twilight is majestic, lovely piece Koyel regards tom

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (9/7/2008 3:30:00 AM)

    I enjoyed twilight and its imagery! Added 10 to it.

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  • Raj Nandy (9/5/2008 11:18:00 PM)

    Koyel, Your beautiful thoughts are clothed in expressive imagery! Keep writing.
    Do inser a short Bio also. With best wishes,
    - Raj Nandy

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (9/5/2008 4:11:00 PM)

    Night is but the dusk's husk;
    Like a woman veiled in dim light it prepares itself for the night, ..........

    twilight still fluffs night when overlay
    as when dream comes half muffled....................wonderful poem by the imgery of earthly rave, yet ingenious true, well penned,120+, thanmks for sharing

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