Two Souls As One Poem by Kasia Fedyk

Two Souls As One

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I am the ocean
and you are the water
I can never be called the ocean
without your precious water
No one can fill my heart the way you do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Green 25 July 2012

very eloquently put, says it all, a great poem

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Okurinmeta Oofrn 19 July 2012

hmm, this reiterate that we are together as one, short but precise. luv this

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Heather Wilson 19 July 2012

Such beautiful words Kasia, just beautiful.

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Neetha Sasidharan 19 July 2012

cool and true poem..........though small it says grt things.......people shouldn't be selfish....without the one next to you, u r nothing.......grt poem...kp writting....

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Jon Terry 18 July 2012

This is wonderfully penned, so much said so simply if i could talk like this the world would be eating out of my hand. Brilliant! ! ! Jon

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