Two Winters Poem by Yasmin Khan

Two Winters

Rating: 4.8


Winter comes, steam from coffee and soup
Soothes the mind, comfort the heart;
Aroma of roasted pistachio and peanuts,
Heating, blankets, duck-feathers,
Warmth of the ones who are closed
All make a crisp winter to yearn for.
Chilly tents, cruel winds, biting cold,
Shivering bodies with bruised hands,
Food with no steam, silent cries coming
From frozen lips and benumbed mouths
All make a bleak winter to ward off.
I live in a city where two winters
exist side by side.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I took the inspiration for this poem when I passed by a nomad's colony.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 10 January 2013

The winter in England never seems to stop. A great poem.

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Hazel Durham 11 January 2013

Brilliant poem about two different viewpoints from people with money and people without money in the winters chill! !

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Khairul Ahsan 03 May 2014

Loved this beautiful poem that portrays a picture of contrast. 'I live in a city where two winters exist side by side.' - But all city dwellers do not see this. You need a poet's eyes and heart to see and feel the contrast. A well written poem on a well chosen subject.

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Heather Wilkins 30 May 2013

a great sequence of similies. so well written with nice images of winter. nice work

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 May 2013

No winter lasts forever.Great write.

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Hira Akhtar 03 May 2013

wow written wonderfully about winter... :)

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Saadat Tahir 13 January 2013

lovely and apt portrayal of a painful and heart wrenching situation... written and conceived very well

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