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The Bare Tree

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The Bare Tree

In the chill of night, I stand and gaze
My boughs bare stretch and sway in haze

The last fallen leaf still at my bole
Lies curled, heaving a sigh on Fate's scroll

The days are gone when I was leaf-clad
My splendor green, in a flowery fad

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The Bare Tree
Sunday, November 17, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: nature love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 12 October 2015

Heartfelt poem, neatly written in a descriptive style.....100 on 10.

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Yasmin Khan 15 April 2016

Thank you kindly, Asim Nehal

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Akhtar Jawad 13 September 2014

Yasmeen's high imagination, lovely description and perfect personification has created a marvelous work of art. i

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Yasmin Khan 15 April 2016

Thank you for your kind words.

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Ramesh Rai 01 January 2014

A beautiful descriptive write.

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Doris Cornago 30 December 2013

Yes, I agree totally, a fine written form, but already worn imagery. How about a refreshing insight on dying, anybody?

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Doris Cornago 30 December 2013

I totally agree. This is indeed a well written poem but already worn imagery. How about a new perspective on dying, anybody?

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Marvin Brato 30 December 2013

Great imaginary, emotional yet insightful sentiments!

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Paddy D Daly 27 December 2013

picturesque and worded beautifully, your poem gives hope

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Hans Vr 24 November 2013

Wow, this is wonderful. I really enjoyed very much reading this poem. It flows like a river, it sounds like music and it touches the heard. Excellent.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 November 2013

Glory to be Allah Praised the world of salvation the dryad nice

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 November 2013

Beautiful description on life of a tree. Very well penned..Loved it Yasmeen.

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