Rajeswari A V

Rookie (29-01-1984 / Kerala)

U Returned At Last! ! ! ! - Poem by Rajeswari A V

When you sang with your intent eyes
Which I alone sensed with my heart
Bud the plant of poetry within myself
To blossom into an aromatic jasmine

You spread your elegance all around
And my foul died down into fragrance
Got unveiled my laughter
When you chiseled my soul with love
And made me hum from heart
And poetize my mind’s murmur

Yet, you once left in haste
Just paying an empty gaze
Failing to grab my silent calls
Leaving nothing but a spark behind
That I kept in private to light up myself
In my lonely dusks without your caress


At last you have returned! ! ! !
Like a vibrant, yet pleasing gust
To swing out my past dust
By calling me your own dearest

Now, this soul says no to music
And ceases verses welling out
But dances as per your heart beat
At this unique wink of oneness


Comments about U Returned At Last! ! ! ! by Rajeswari A V

  • (9/19/2006 1:25:00 AM)

    when a poet writes from the heart, the emotions dance, and the poetry gives a musical effect, and this one's just that.
    SUPERB!

    Preets
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  • (9/16/2006 9:11:00 AM)

    He made his eyes sing the lonely song
    And that you heard with a passion heart
    He did sow this poetry in your goodself
    Thus, you blossomed better than jasmine

    He did spread his elegance for you
    And armoured you of all weaknesses
    He unvieled that smile of your face
    And carved your soul with his love
    He made you write this from your heart
    And showed us all in PH, the poet in you!
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  • (9/8/2006 8:15:00 AM)

    Beautifully written straight from the heart.Well done.
    Love...TO
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  • (9/8/2006 3:43:00 AM)

    Now, this soul says no to music
    And ceases verses welling out
    But dances as per your heart beat
    At this unique wink of oneness

    Music of poetry never remains as a verse it makes in us in qualms...but it is real feel driving posed to a ailing illusion....
    it makes a appaling amity in poem
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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 8, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, September 3, 2010


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