U Returned At Last! ! ! ! Poem by Rajeswari A V

U Returned At Last! ! ! !

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When you sang with your intent eyes
Which I alone sensed with my heart
Bud the plant of poetry within myself
To blossom into an aromatic jasmine

You spread your elegance all around
And my foul died down into fragrance
Got unveiled my laughter
When you chiseled my soul with love
And made me hum from heart
And poetize my mind’s murmur

Yet, you once left in haste
Just paying an empty gaze
Failing to grab my silent calls
Leaving nothing but a spark behind
That I kept in private to light up myself
In my lonely dusks without your caress


At last you have returned! ! ! !
Like a vibrant, yet pleasing gust
To swing out my past dust
By calling me your own dearest

Now, this soul says no to music
And ceases verses welling out
But dances as per your heart beat
At this unique wink of oneness

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 19 September 2006

when a poet writes from the heart, the emotions dance, and the poetry gives a musical effect, and this one's just that. SUPERB! Preets

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Catastrophe King 16 September 2006

He made his eyes sing the lonely song And that you heard with a passion heart He did sow this poetry in your goodself Thus, you blossomed better than jasmine He did spread his elegance for you And armoured you of all weaknesses He unvieled that smile of your face And carved your soul with his love He made you write this from your heart And showed us all in PH, the poet in you!

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Tranquil Ocean 08 September 2006

Beautifully written straight from the heart.Well done. Love...TO

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Kee Thampi 08 September 2006

Now, this soul says no to music And ceases verses welling out But dances as per your heart beat At this unique wink of oneness Music of poetry never remains as a verse it makes in us in qualms...but it is real feel driving posed to a ailing illusion.... it makes a appaling amity in poem

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