Rajeswari A V

Rookie (29-01-1984 / Kerala)

Ecstasy - Poem by Rajeswari A V

How nice it’s to look at this blue sky and to forget myself
This joy emanating from an unknown source deep within myself
This inner urge to be a part of such a mind-blowing ambience
And this very gift of spreading my adore all over the universe
Everything makes me feel that I’m the little princess,
Who can take wing in the company of the wavering wind
And can dance as per the rhythm of these giggling rivulets
Where to find a background to paint my inner emotions
How to make use of words to give form to my zealous spirit?
This way and that way, when this heart leaps in extreme ecstasy
I’ve nothing to do except to smile at everything come my way.


Comments about Ecstasy by Rajeswari A V

  • Charles Garcia (8/20/2006 11:31:00 PM)

    congradulation:
    you have a great start, lets keep writing you have itl
    How to make use of the words to give form;

    Simply; get hold of a good Oxford dictionary, its all there
    Charles Garcia
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  • Nalini Hebbar (8/17/2006 5:11:00 AM)

    a well written poem rajeshwari...you have talent...keep writing...i loved the last line very much...keep that smile on...dont let anything wipe that off your face...love...nalini (Report)Reply

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  • Kee Thampi (8/17/2006 3:18:00 AM)

    How nice it’s to look at this blue sky and to forget myself
    This joy emanating from an unknown source deep within myself
    This inner urge to be a part of such a mind-blowing ambience
    And this very gift of spreading my adore all over the universe
    Everything makes me feel that I’m the little princess,
    the spiraling of images in your nice poem makes a nice start
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  • Subhash Sivan (8/17/2006 2:29:00 AM)

    Hello Rajeswari Really a nice poem...
    When I went through the lines...I felt, , .like going through these lines
    I wandered lonely as a cloud..........
    That floats high on vales and hills.......
    Sketch your inner imotions on the fairness of a paper
    There will be readers share that portraits into there inner canvas
    niranjan.........
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  • Preeti - is here! (8/17/2006 1:29:00 AM)

    Rajeshwari, i loved the imagery used here. Lovely poem. Keep writing..and yes continue smiling through thick and thin!

    Preets
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 17, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 25, 2010


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