Ultimate Betrayal Poem by Godfrey Morris

Ultimate Betrayal

Rating: 4.5


You once promised the sun
the moon and the stars maybe.

I did believe.

My heart I so entrusted
to only have it ripped apart.

So much as the delicate wings of a fl'wer

These eyes of yours appeal no more

So now I ask
When you say you love me?

Please say it as if you care.

Friday, May 17, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,wings
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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 12 June 2013

agree with Valerie, your truthfully words give a soul to this poem very good my friend

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 12 June 2013

agree with Valerie, your truthfully words give a soul to this poem very good my friend

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Valerie Dohren 31 May 2013

Those special words should be said truthfully, but they are said too often without being genuine. Good one Godfrey.

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Godfrey Morris

Godfrey Morris

Kingston, Jamaica
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