Unappealing Blank Papers Poem by .Pd. is here

Unappealing Blank Papers

Rating: 5.0


All the blank pages
Normally would invite
A pen to leave a mark
Wooing the writer to
Print their memories
Of good times
And otherwise.
But these pages –
Crisp and white
Hold no appeal
For me to draft out
A blueprint of my mind,
Because when the mind
Is not at peace
Its best to withdraw
Rather than to destroy
The Beauty of paper
And to make them
Messsed up just like my life-
‘Where the AFTERMATH
Stretches into infinity.’

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aashish Ameya 23 August 2006

all the best for a beautiful life

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Catastrophe King 23 August 2006

AMEN! ! We all here are sure you will not mess your life - you are very matured surely. BTW... this is a beautiful piece.

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Asma Bahrainwala 06 September 2006

hey preets, nice write. 'Unappealing Blank Papers'-is quite an appealing poem. :) Beautifully rendered! Last two lines r indeed very striking.

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Krishna Dasani 30 August 2006

life's dark when life's like 'kora kaagaz'.. amazing write up.. a new subject matter for me.. it was fun reading it.. awesome! ! keep it up.. smiles, krishna

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Rajaram Ramachandran 28 August 2006

Preeti can create something out of nothing-I find from this poem. Your imagination is very much on the high side.

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Nalini Hebbar 23 August 2006

kora kagaz...kora na rahega...you have talent preets...i know you will fill up books...love...nalini

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Sandra Fowler 23 August 2006

Blank papers may be unappealing, but your poem is quite the opposite. You write with wisdom and great charm. Regards, Sandra

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