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Unknown Sister - Poem by .Pd. is here

I asked for a sister and soon after -
You breathed in my mothers womb
The garden of our family seemed to bloom
A Joyous life ahead was what we all assumed.

Alas! To the dawn you never awoke.
How can I possibly remember the face I never got to see?
Tell me, how do I love the one who never got to be?
How do I mourn the death of the one who never knew me?

'Love you ', my unknown sister!
You are an angel in my memory,
You lived a life of darkness, though in a hurry
This bitterness and antagonism, how can i bury?

You Live in my dreams
A life like no one else has ever seen
My stillborn sister we both are akin
In your next birth your luck will surely grin.

Life's a see-saw of joy and pain
And for many, like you, its ceases to begin
Having lost out in the game of life, but deep within
My Portarit of thoughts - a chance to live you deserve to win.

*Not based on authors personal experience


(Written on November 08,2005)


Comments about Unknown Sister by .Pd. is here

  • (4/9/2007 10:59:00 AM)


    amazing poem....
    i dont know how many of ur poems are best...
    u write wonderful...
    keep it up.....
    Niks
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  • Jibin Joseph (1/31/2007 10:22:00 AM)


    simply superb...............
    peace
    jibin
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  • Arti Chopra (12/6/2006 12:31:00 AM)


    beautiful poem Preeti.....seems so very real
    Arti
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  • (9/6/2006 12:56:00 PM)


    The way you utilise your power of the HUMANE aspect in yourself is just un-matched. How you do visualise and then able to pen those painful moments? This is indeed a skill so rare. I am sure with age you will grow up to make a difference in this world.... and that is waht is important. (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/28/2006 12:41:00 AM)


    THANK GOD, NOT A PERSONAL EVENT, BUT UNFORTUNATELY, SUCH AN
    EVENT FOR TOO MANY...YOU'VE CAOTURED THE DEEP[ROOTED SORROW SO WELL....SADLY STELLAR WRITE...10
    ''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
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  • (5/11/2006 4:19:00 AM)


    it was so nice to read and so painful to understand. (Report) Reply

  • Cj Heck (12/14/2005 6:54:00 AM)


    A wonderful poem, Preeti. For someone who didn't experience this, you've done a marvelous job with such a sad subject. The love literally flows through it.
    Warmest regards and respect,
    CJ
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 14, 2005

Poem Edited: Friday, April 20, 2007


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