I was like a paper boat
Loaded with innocence
Started the voyage on
The sea of time….
To a destination unknown
With much trials and
Tribulations; with my brow
Crushing against treacherous
Tides I moved on…..
I had onslaughts by
The heavy rain drops
And threatening dark
Clouds and thunders
To unfold myself like a
Lost soul and fall flat as
A carcass in the depth of
Nothingness I have never
Dreamt of a life so uncertain.
The first two lines are captivating! Wonderful use of simile..a beautiful poem! (10)
I was like a paper boat Loaded with innocence Started the voyage on The sea of time…. To a destination unknown- - - - - Life is so uncertain- - Destination unknown- - A beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.
Life on Earth is just like a paper boat. This floats and this moves on. There is no certainty in this life. An amazing perceptional poem is brilliantly penned....10
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Life itself is uncertain. It snatches our innocence and throw us in the sea of uncertainty. Beautifully described poem. Compliments.